Week 7

[Lisa Donahue]

Ahh, I didn't think I would win, thanks, you guys

[Neil Garcia]

Mar 9, 2010 19:59:19 GMT -5 Producer said:

The results are in!

First I will post the original paragraph, then the corrected paragraph with the total number of corrections. Please understand that we only accepted it if it was the MOST correct answer. If you're unclear, please PM me and I will explain. Good luck houseguests

ORIGINAL

"big Brother is often a difficult game to play inn. It's is important too allways have you're eyes on the prize and nevar loose focuss on teh task ahead with so many houseguests competititions, alliences going on you could get caught up and end up evicted be fore you no it. How ever their are many diferent strageties one can use when playing the game. You can try to win every thing you can or you can through every challenge that comes your way. You never know who can or we'll win so dont ever give up and never go down without a fight."

CORRECTED

"Big Brother is often a difficult game to play (removed "inn"). It's (removed "is") important to always have your eyes on the prize and to never lose focus on the task ahead. With so many houseguests, competitions, and alliances going on, you could get caught up and end up evicted before you know it. However, there are many different strategies one can use when playing the game. You can try to win everything (removed "you can") or you can throw every challenge that comes your way. You never know who can or will win, so don’t ever give up and never go down without a fight."


Technically, there could be a colon after "when playing the game" but it's correct either way so if you corrected this, I'm sorry, we didn't count it.

Total spotted corrections: 32


Ashlea: 23
David: 29
Lisa: 32
Erika: 27
Matt: 20
Neil: *DID NOT COMPETE*



Congratulations, Lisa! You are the winner of the Power of Veto this week. Please PM Julie and I with your decision so we can post the ceremony.

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your wrong wrong wrong I did compete I did it the fist day it was up and its in my diaryroom
correct this

[Neil Garcia]

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[Julie Chen]

Neil, calm down. You did the competition 4 hours after results were posted, so I guess you should check that link of yours.